Sunday, October 25, 2009

working things out



2 comments:

  1. argh sorry i cant find my phone at the moment... but i now dont know if i like the first one with or without the hair, i am kinda thinking without. or if you can make the hair one bigger so that it covers the entire image. As for the second image the hair is not working. I think the asphalt idea has potential though. Um also the guy's head is pretty visible in the image, i thought that it was more ambiguous before...

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  2. in these images I say no hair but probably the hair could just be integrated in a more sophisticated way, more masking/weaving/layering, something, maybe it's just compositional. The hair has potential though. The problem with the no-hair is that might get a bit generic.

    k

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